I am not who I was

I made 2 versions of this poem. They are similar but the writing flair is different. Do comment which version you prefered.

Version-1:

Everyone experiences brakes.

Everyone makes mistakes.

Everyone undergoes change.

Everyone were once fakes.

Past ain't determining one's range.

Past doesn't mean one can't currently manage.

Past doesn't mean I'm yet the same.

Past doesn't remain in one's ribcage.

Cuz people know now their real name.

People know now the rules of the game.

Together we'll shout,"I am not who I was!"

And hope you remember us for the same.

Version-2:

I am not who I was.

No longer you see me making a dramatic fuss.

I know now my real name.

Hope you too see the same.

I am not who I was.

No longer I'm the weak cuss.

I now get the rules of the game.

Hope you too see the same.

I am not who I was.

Hatred from others I've learnt to minus.

I get it one shouldn't be lame.

Hope you too see the same.

I am not who I was.

Positivity, goodness I have learnt to plus.

Happiness matters more than fame.

Hope you too see the same.

Cuz I am not who I was,

Hope you too see the same.

Reputation.